On Mon, 2008-03-24 at 23:39 +0100, Boris Iolis wrote:
> Hello everyone,
> 
> I just finished a first draft proposal. I've put it on the wiki, there:
> 
> http://www.thousandparsec.net/wiki/Jabawock%27s_proposal_for_GSoC
> 
> Feel free to leave comments or questions on the page, so I can improve it.

As in my feedback to Jphr and vi1985 proposals I'm mainly concerned
with producing a good Road Map. I would recommend that you expand
"Schedule" section and turn it into a "Road Map" with estimated dates. 

Specially important are "functional milestones", these are where you say
specific things which will work - for example, "A client will be able to
login and view the universe", "A player will be able to place units",
etc. They should be testable by your mentor externally, something like
"The framework will be done" is not suitable.

You should be more specific then your current timeline. Of course these
dates will change as you get more information - but it should be good
for seeing if you have included enough work. We are happy to help you
adjust your timeline as we have better knowledge on how long certain
things will take.

I like your clustering of rules into a groups. I think your SIII ruleset
needs more expansion - don't assume that we have played the game. Some
of Lee's suggestions are relevant here, I've pasted them below.

> - list all object types
> What objects are possible in the universe, what properties do they
> have?
> 
> - for each object type, list possible orders that could be given to it
> Only objects which can be "owned" in some way. What can the objects
> do? How are they told? (order parameters)
> 
> - What happens at the end of each turn
> And in what order? Remember that TP has simultaneous end of turn, like
> civnet and freeciv, not sequential end of turns, like civ. Though with
> some work you could do sequential EoT.

I would recommend taking a look at Lee's "ruleset-book", it's probably
quite out of date and it was never completed, but it is still pretty
good.
http://git.thousandparsec.net/gitweb/gitweb.cgi?p=ruleset-book.git;a=summary

Hope this helps.

Tim 'Mithro' Ansell

_______________________________________________
tp-devel mailing list
[email protected]
http://www.thousandparsec.net/tp/mailman.php/listinfo/tp-devel

Reply via email to