Hi,

Please commit this patch for me. It got some grammar improvements and
other minor enhancements.

thanks
diff -ru tracker-website.4993/download.html tracker-website/download.html
--- tracker-website.4993/download.html	2007-02-07 16:48:00.000000000 +0200
+++ tracker-website/download.html	2007-02-07 20:56:29.000000000 +0200
@@ -39,23 +39,23 @@
 <a href="http://www.gnome.org/~jamiemcc/tracker/tracker-0.5.4.tar.gz";>http://www.gnome.org/~jamiemcc/tracker/tracker-0.5.4.tar.gz</a>
 
 <h4>Debian i386</h4>
-Experimental debian repo can be found at:
+A repository for those running Debian can be enabled by adding the following line in /etc/apt/sources.list:
 <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ unstable main</div>
 
 <h4>Ubuntu i386</h4>
 <ul>	
     <li>
-        <p>Feisty 7.04: Tracker is in the universe. </p>
+        <p>Feisty 7.04: Tracker is available in Universe </p>
 	</li>
 	<li>
-        <p>Edgy 6.10: repo <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ edgy main</div></p>
+        <p>Edgy 6.10: Add this line to your /etc/apt/sources.list <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ edgy main</div></p>
     </li>
     <li>
-        <p>Dappper 6.06: repo <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ dapper main</div></p>
+        <p>Dappper 6.06: Add this line to your /etc/apt/sources.list <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ dapper main</div></p>
     </li>
 </ul>
 
-<h4>Debian Based Distro or non i386 Debian and Ubuntu</h4>
+<h4>Debian-based distros or non-i386 Debian and Ubuntu systems</h4>
 Add the following to your /etc/apt/sources.list:
     <div class="terminal">
         deb-src http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ dapper main


diff -ru tracker-website.4993/features.html tracker-website/features.html
--- tracker-website.4993/features.html	2007-02-07 16:48:00.000000000 +0200
+++ tracker-website/features.html	2007-02-07 20:10:22.000000000 +0200
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 	<li>Supports the WC3's RDF Query syntax for querying that metadata.</li>
 </ul>
 
-<h3>Efficienct and Stable</h3>
+<h3>Efficient and Stable</h3>
 <ul>
 <li>Written in C for maximum efficiency.</li>
 	<li>Designed and built to run well on lower-memory systems with typically 128MB or 256MB memory. Typical RAM usage is 3-9 MB.</li>
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 <h3>Components</h3>
 <ul>
 	<li>Indexer, a lightweight daemon that extracts information from files (trackerd).</li>
-	<li>Tracker search tool, a small GUI to search for indexed data.</li>
+	<li>Tracker Search Tool, a small GUI to search for indexed data.</li>
 	<li>Command line tools for searching, querying the daemon status, and tagging.</li>
 	<li>libtracker, a C wrapper around the DBus API.</li>
 	<li>Full DBus API for application authors using different toolkits or programming languages.</li>
@@ -69,22 +69,22 @@
 
 <h3> Use Cases </h3>
 <ul>
-	<li> Application-neutral and desktop-neutral tagging. Tagging support 'for free' in any application that uses tracker, such as Nautilus and file-chooser dialogs.</li>
-	<li> A cross-application metadata database. If applications chooses to use Tracker as their metadata database and indexer, they would see signifigant improvements. Users would no longer need to add a MP3 they have downloaded to Rhythmbox, nor a photo they have taken to f-spot, these items would be detected and imported automatically.</li>
+	<li> Application-neutral and desktop-neutral tagging: Tagging support 'for free' in any application that uses tracker, such as Nautilus and file-chooser dialogs.</li>
+	<li> A cross-application metadata database: If applications choose to use Tracker as their metadata database and indexer, they would see significant improvements. Users would no longer need to add an MP3 they have downloaded to Rhythmbox, nor a photo they have taken to f-spot. These items would be detected and imported automatically.</li>
 	<li> Users may completely move away from a folder-heirarchy based home folder, and instead organise their data into collections using tags. The combination of tagging support in the file-chooser, tagging awareness in Nautilus, or even a tag based filesystem using FUSE could allow radical exploration of new desktop ideas.</li>
-	<li> Improved performance. With an always running indexer application start up time could be dramatically reduced in instances where applicaions scan or parse a numer of files on disk. For example alacarte could use tracker as its desktop file parser, or rhythmbox could use tracker as its song index. In addition by using a DBus based API one can take advantage of asynchronous replies for improved GUI responsiveness.</li>
+	<li> Improved performance: With an always running indexer application, start-up time could be dramatically reduced in instances where applicaions scan or parse a number of files on disk. For example, it could be used by Alacarte as its desktop file parser or Rhythmbox as its song indexer. In addition, by using a DBus-based API, one can take advantage of asynchronous replies for improved GUI responsiveness.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <h3>Object store</h3>
-Tracker can also provide a user definable object store (for things like notes, playists, contacts etc) complete with user definable properties (metadata). Using tracker as a storage base has a number of benefits:
+Tracker can also provide a user definable object store (for things like notes, playlists, contacts, etc.) complete with user definable properties (metadata). Using tracker as a storage base has a number of benefits:
 <ul>
-	<li>Automatically indexed via crawler or notifications frameworks </li>
+	<li>Automatically indexed via crawler or notifications frameworks.</li>
 	<li>Embedded metadata and text contents are fully extracted and indexed for storage and high speed search.</li>
-	<li>Extensible metadata and tags. All entities can have an almost infinite number of properties which can be application or user-defined</li>
-	<li>Persistent internal storage of objects removes the need for storing them externally if desired</li>
-	<li>Link and define explicit relationships between different objects</li>
-	<li>Easily explotable and shareable via high level and rich Dbus based interfaces</li>
-	<li>Searchable and queryable by content or by any criteria. Provides one of the richest and most powerful search frameworks currently available</li>
+	<li>Extensible metadata and tags. All entities can have an almost infinite number of properties which can be application or user-defined.</li>
+	<li>Persistent internal storage of objects removes the need for storing them externally if desired.</li>
+	<li>Link and define explicit relationships between different objects.</li>
+	<li>Easily exploitable and shareable via high level and rich DBus-based interfaces.</li>
+	<li>Searchable and queryable by content or by any criteria. Provides one of the richest and most powerful search frameworks currently available.</li>
 </ul>
 <h3>Tagging</h3>
 Tags are one-word labels that you can assign to any file to help you categorize and remember them. 

Only in tracker-website.4993/images: screenshot-search_for_technologies.png


diff -ru tracker-website.4993/index.html tracker-website/index.html
--- tracker-website.4993/index.html	2007-02-07 16:48:00.000000000 +0200
+++ tracker-website/index.html	2007-02-07 19:40:09.000000000 +0200
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 <p>Metadata, or data about data includes attributes specific to each file, such as the artist of a song or the author of a document. Tracker reads this metadata, and places it into and index, which allows searches to be lightning fast. Tracker updates its index automatically, so search results are always accurate up-to-the-moment.</p>
 <p>Tracker doesn't stop there -- by allowing you to attach your own metadata to files it frees you from having to keep everything in highly organised folders. You can add one or many 'tags' to files, effectively grouping several files in your filesystem even if they are located in different folders. So, tagging can be much easier and more flexible than fitting your information into preconceived categories or folders.</p>
 
-<h4>Supported information sources include:</h4>
+<h4>Supported information sources</h4>
 
 <table class="tab_class">
 	<tr><td><img alt="files" src="images/files.png"/></td><td><strong>Files</strong></td></tr>
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 	<tr><td><img alt="developmentfiles" src="images/development.png"/></td><td><strong>Development Files</strong></td></tr>
 </table>
 
-<h4>Planned support:</h4>
+<h4>Planned support</h4>
 <table class="tab_class">
 	<tr><td><img alt="playlist" src="images/playlist.png"/></td><td><strong>Playlists</strong></td></tr>
 	<tr><td><img alt="notes" src="images/notes.png"/></td><td><strong>Notes</strong></td></tr>
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@
 
 <h4>26th January 2007 - Tracker 0.5.4 "Speed Daemon" released!</h4>
 
-<p>A lot of BUGS Fixes and New Features:
+<p>A lot of Bug Fixes and New Features:
 	<ul>
 		<li>
-			<strong>Indexing at ludicrous speed</strong> - massively optimised indexing so its now 10x faster than previous version. Indexing speeds are now around 100 ext files per second (which is about the maximum possible considering the I/O time to read 100 files from a hard drive).
+			<strong>Indexing at ludicrous speed</strong> - massively optimised indexing so its now 10x faster than previous version. Indexing speeds are now around 100 text files per second (which is about the maximum possible considering the I/O time to read 100 files from a hard drive).
 		</li>
 		<li>
 			<strong>Index while you work</strong> - now scheduled even better so it should never slow the system down whilst allowing users to work without being affected by or even noticing it.
@@ -101,9 +101,6 @@
 	</ul>
 </p>
 
-<p>
-	<em>Note: The email indexer is not working yet but it is planned for the next release. The possibility to enable it in the conf file is intended only for developing purpose.</em>
-</p>
 
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diff -ru tracker-website.4993/screenshots.html tracker-website/screenshots.html
--- tracker-website.4993/screenshots.html	2007-02-07 16:48:00.000000000 +0200
+++ tracker-website/screenshots.html	2007-02-07 20:45:17.000000000 +0200
@@ -38,12 +38,6 @@
 		<img src="images/screenshot-search_for_test_thumbnail.png" width="350" height="217" alt="Screenshot -- Search for test" />
 	</a>
 </p>
-<p> A global search for <em>technologies</em>.</p>
-<p>
-	<a href="images/screenshot-search_for_technologies.png">
-		<img src="images/screenshot-search_for_technologies_thumbnail.png" width="313" height="211" alt="search for technologies" />
-	</a>
-</p>
 <p> A search for only the Music file related to <em>Pearl Jam</em> band.</p>
 <p>
 	<a href="images/screenshot-t-s-t_search_for_pearl_jam.png"><img src="images/screenshot-t-s-t_search_for_pearl_jam_thumbnail.png" width="350" height="217" alt="example search" /></a>


diff -ru tracker-website.4993/start.html tracker-website/start.html
--- tracker-website.4993/start.html	2007-02-07 16:48:00.000000000 +0200
+++ tracker-website/start.html	2007-02-07 20:38:26.000000000 +0200
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 <div id="content">
 
 <h3>Installation</h3>
-<p>To install tracker you can compile from the source or grab an RPM or DEB package.</p>
+<p>To install Tracker you can compile from the source or grab an RPM or DEB package.</p>
 <h4>Installing from the source</h4>
 <ol>
     <li>
@@ -61,19 +61,19 @@
     </li>
 </ol>
 
-<h4>Installing using packages</h4>
-<p>Refer to the <a href="download.html">download</a> to see how to download the tracker-packages for your favourite distribution. Here we display only how the tracker packages are organized.</p>
+<h4>Installing using binary packages</h4>
+<p>Refer to the <a href="download.html">download</a> to see how to download Tracker packages for your distribution. Here we only show how Tracker packages are organized.</p>
 
 <p>
-	Every distribution has its own way to pack tracker, however you can recognise two main part:
+	Every distribution has its own way of packaging Tracker. However you can recognise two main part:
 	<ul>
-		<li><strong>tracker</strong> -- Usually this one has no dependencies related to a Desktop Enviroment and is the "desktop agnostic part". This basicly means you can install on KDE/XFCE/Fluxbox/* without installing any GNOME-related dependecies.</li>	
-		<li><strong>tracker-search-tool</strong> -- the Graphical User Interface to search using tracker. This has GNOME-dependencies</li>
+		<li><strong>tracker</strong> -- Usually this one has no dependencies related to a Desktop Enviroment and is the "desktop agnostic part". This basically means you can install on KDE/XFCE/Fluxbox/* without installing any GNOME-related dependencies.</li>	
+		<li><strong>tracker-search-tool</strong> -- The GNOME-dependent GUI search tool.</li>
 	</ul>
 	We want to keep the indexer free from any specific dependences related to a particular Desktop Enviroment.
 </p>
 
-<p>As example we write how to install using a Debian/Ubuntu system
+<p>An example on installing using a Debian-like system:
 
 <ul>
 	<li><div class="terminal">apt-get install tracker tracker-utils</div> to install the indexer and the command line</li>
@@ -90,8 +90,8 @@
 	<li>the tracker-search-tool <div class="terminal">tracker-search-tool</div> <em>(If you have installed the relevant package)</em></li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>For more information in how configure tracker read the README file or refer to <a href="documentation.html">Documentation</a>.</p>
-<p>For more information about the others GUI available to search with tracker refer to <a href="documentation.html#other_gui">Documention Other GUI</a> </p>
+<p>For information on how to configure Tracker, see the README file (in the root of the source directory or in /usr/share/doc/tracker/README) or refer to <a href="documentation.html">Documentation</a>.</p>
+<p>For information about other GUI search tools supporting Tracker, refer to <a href="documentation.html#other_gui">Other GUI's</a>.</p>
 
 
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