Hi,

Here's a patch for some grammar correction and to add some consistency
(tracker -> Tracker) in some of the pages, and some other minor
stuff...
Index: start.html
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--- start.html	(revision 5137)
+++ start.html	(working copy)
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 <div id="content">
 
 <h3>Getting Started</h3>
-<p>To install tracker you can compile from the source or grab an RPM or DEB package.</p>
+<p>To install Tracker, you can compile from source or grab either an RPM or a DEB package.</p>
 <h4>Installing from source</h4>
 <ol>
     <li>
@@ -86,12 +86,12 @@
     <li>
         <p><strong>Ubuntu Edgy</strong> (x86 arch) -  add the following to your /etc/apt/sources.list</p>
         <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ edgy main</div>
-        <em>(download this <a href="http://www.michaelbiebl.de/biebl.asc";>GPG key</a> and import it into APT using "sudo apt-key add biebl.asc"</em>
+        <em>(download this <a href="http://www.michaelbiebl.de/biebl.asc";>GPG key</a> and import it into APT using "sudo apt-key add biebl.asc")</em>
     </li>
     <li>
         <p><strong>Ubuntu Dapper</strong> (x86 arch) -  add the following to your /etc/apt/sources.list</p>
         <div class="terminal">deb http://debs.michaelbiebl.de/ dapper main</div>
-        <em>(download this <a href="http://www.michaelbiebl.de/biebl.asc";>GPG key</a> and import it into APT using "sudo apt-key add biebl.asc"</em>
+        <em>(download this <a href="http://www.michaelbiebl.de/biebl.asc";>GPG key</a> and import it into APT using "sudo apt-key add biebl.asc")</em>
     </li>
     <li>
         <p><strong>Fedora 5 or 6</strong> -  available in Fedora Extras.</p>
@@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
 			<p><strong>Gentoo</strong> - Tracker is now included in portage.</p>
     </li>
     <li>
-			<p><strong>Mandriva</strong> - Tracker is now included in in the contrib section of Cooker (the development distro). It is going to be available in stable release from Mandriva Linux 2007 Spring.</p>
+			<p><strong>Mandriva</strong> - Tracker is now included in in the contrib section of Cooker (the development distro). It is going to be available in the stable release of Mandriva Linux 2007 Spring.</p>
     </li>
 </ul>
 
Index: features.html
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--- features.html	(revision 5137)
+++ features.html	(working copy)
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
 <h3>Components</h3>
 <ul>
 	<li>Indexer, a lightweight daemon that extracts information from files (trackerd).</li>
-	<li>Tracker search tool, a small GUI to search for indexed data.</li>
+	<li>Tracker Search Tool, a small GUI to search for indexed data.</li>
 	<li>Command line tools for searching, querying the daemon status, and tagging.</li>
 	<li>libtracker, a C wrapper around the DBus API.</li>
 	<li>Full DBus API for application authors using different toolkits or programming languages.</li>
@@ -80,28 +80,28 @@
 
 <h3> Use Cases </h3>
 <ul>
-	<li> Application-neutral and desktop-neutral tagging. Tagging support 'for free' in any application that uses tracker, such as Nautilus and file-chooser dialogs.</li>
+	<li> Application-neutral and desktop-neutral tagging. Tagging support 'for free' in any application that uses Tracker, such as Nautilus and file-chooser dialogs.</li>
 	<li> A cross-application metadata database. If applications chooses to use Tracker as their metadata database and indexer, they would see signifigant improvements. Users would no longer need to add a MP3 they have downloaded to Rhythmbox, nor a photo they have taken to f-spot, these items would be detected and imported automatically.</li>
 	<li> Users may completely move away from a folder-heirarchy based home folder, and instead organise their data into collections using tags. The combination of tagging support in the file-chooser, tagging awareness in Nautilus, or even a tag based filesystem using FUSE could allow radical exploration of new desktop ideas.</li>
-	<li> Improved performance. With an always running indexer application start up time could be dramatically reduced in instances where applicaions scan or parse a numer of files on disk. For example alacarte could use tracker as its desktop file parser, or rhythmbox could use tracker as its song index. In addition by using a DBus based API one can take advantage of asynchronous replies for improved GUI responsiveness.</li>
+	<li> Improved performance. With an always running indexer, application start-up time could be dramatically reduced in instances where applicaions scan or parse a numer of files on disk. For example, Alacarte could use it as its desktop file parser, or Rhythmbox as its song index. In addition, by using a DBus-based API, one can take advantage of asynchronous replies for improved GUI responsiveness.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <h3>Object store</h3>
-Tracker can also provide a user definable object store (for things like notes, playists, contacts etc) complete with user definable properties (metadata). Using tracker as a storage base has a number of benefits:
+Tracker can also provide a user definable object store (for things like notes, playlists, contacts, etc) complete with user-definable properties (metadata). Using Tracker as a storage base has a number of benefits:
 <ul>
-	<li>Automatically indexed via crawler or notifications frameworks </li>
+	<li>Automatically indexed via crawler or notifications frameworks. </li>
 	<li>Embedded metadata and text contents are fully extracted and indexed for storage and high speed search.</li>
-	<li>Extensible metadata and tags. All entities can have an almost infinite number of properties which can be application or user-defined</li>
-	<li>Persistent internal storage of objects removes the need for storing them externally if desired</li>
-	<li>Link and define explicit relationships between different objects</li>
-	<li>Easily explotable and shareable via high level and rich Dbus based interfaces</li>
-	<li>Searchable and queryable by content or by any criteria. Provides one of the richest and most powerful search frameworks currently available</li>
+	<li>Extensible metadata and tags. All entities can have an almost infinite number of properties which can be application or user-defined.</li>
+	<li>Persistent internal storage of objects removes the need for storing them externally if desired.</li>
+	<li>Link and define explicit relationships between different objects.</li>
+	<li>Easily exploitable and shareable via high level and rich Dbus based interfaces.</li>
+	<li>Searchable and queryable by content or by any criteria. Provides one of the richest and most powerful search frameworks currently available.</li>
 </ul>
 <h3>Tagging</h3>
 Tags are one-word labels that you can assign to any file to help you categorize and remember them. 
 <ul>
 	<li>You can assign as many tags to a file as you like and rename or delete the tags later.</li>
-	<li>You can organize under a logical tag several file in different folder an retrieve all of them using the common tag.</li>
+	<li>You can organize, under a logical tag, several files in different folders and retrieve all of them using the common tag.</li>
 </ul> 
 
 <div id="footer">
Index: development.html
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--- development.html	(revision 5137)
+++ development.html	(working copy)
@@ -49,11 +49,13 @@
 <p>Retrieve current development code with the following command:</p>
 <div class="terminal">svn checkout http://svn.gnome.org/svn/tracker/trunk</div>
 
-<p>To build under the subversion you have to compile as <div class="terminal">./autogen.sh --prefix=/usr --sysconfdir=/etc --enable-debug-code --enable-preferences</div></p>
+<p>To build under the subversion you have to compile as: <div class="terminal">./autogen.sh --prefix=/usr --sysconfdir=/etc</div></p>
 
-<p>ViewCVS web interface for svn:</p><a href="http://svn.gnome.org/viewcvs/tracker/";>http://svn.gnome.org/viewcvs/tracker/</a>
+<p>(See the README file for additional info)</p>
 
+<p>ViewCVS web interface for svn: <a href="http://svn.gnome.org/viewcvs/tracker/";>http://svn.gnome.org/viewcvs/tracker/</a></p>
 
+
 <h3>Developing applications using Tracker</h3>
 <p>We are planning to set-up a proper page into the Wiki ASAP. For now we write into the <a href="faq.html">FAQ</a> the questions collected in the IRC channel.</p>
 
Index: index.html
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--- index.html	(revision 5137)
+++ index.html	(working copy)
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 
 <table class="tab_class">
     <tr>
-        <td colspan="2"><h4>Supported information sources include:</h4></td>
+        <td colspan="2"><h4>Supported data sources:</h4></td>
         <td colspan="2"><h4>Planned support:</h4></td>
     </tr>
     
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
         <td><img alt="documents" src="images/docs.png"/></td>
         <td><strong>Documents</strong></td>
         <td><img alt="notes" src="images/notes.png"/></td>
-        <td><strong>Notes</strong></td>
+        <td><strong>Notes</strong> (in development)</td>
     </tr>
     
     <tr>
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
         <td><img alt="videos" src="images/videos.png"/></td>
         <td><strong>Videos</strong></td>
         <td><img alt="emails" src="images/email.png"/></td>
-        <td><strong>Emails</strong></td>        
+        <td><strong>Emails</strong> (Evolution support available in svn)</td>        
     </tr>
     
     <tr>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
 
 <h4>26th January 2007 - Tracker 0.5.4 "Speed Daemon" released!</h4>
 
-<p>A lot of BUGS Fixes and New Features:</p>
+<p>A lot of BUG Fixes and New Features:</p>
 <ul>
 	<li>
 		<strong>Indexing at ludicrous speed</strong> - massively optimised indexing so its now 10x faster than previous version. Indexing speeds are now around 100 ext files per second (which is about the maximum possible considering the I/O time to read 100 files from a hard drive).
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