Geoff, Thank you very much for your review.
Regards, Alia On Fri, Apr 15, 2016 at 9:44 PM, Geoff Huston <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello, > > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. > The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related > drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes > on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to > the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please > see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir > > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it > would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last > Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through > discussion or by updating the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-arp-optimization-05.txt > Reviewer: Geoff Huston > Review Date: 16 April 2016 > IETF LC End Date: date-if-known > Intended Status: copy-from-I-D > > Summary: > This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits > that should be considered prior to publication. > > Comments: > I found the draft concise and clear. It was readable and readily > understood. > > Major Issues: > No major issues found > > > Minor Issues: > No minor issues found. > > Nits: > Minor: > section 2: “...receive and save such mapping information also.” > seems a bit stilted and I would say “also receive and save such mapping > information. > > section 3.1 "populate the information of sender's IP/MAC in its > ARP table”. Do the authors really mean "ARP table" if the information was > learned by ND? i.e. its clear that the authors are referring to the local > IP/MAC address table, but the previous text tends to associated ARP with > IPv4 and ND with IPv6. Perhaps “AARP/ND table” ? > _______________________________________________ > trill mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill >
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