Submitting -05.txt is great. Sue
Sent via the Samsung Galaxy Note5, an AT&T 4G LTE smartphone -------- Original message --------From: Mingui Zhang <[email protected]> Date: 8/11/16 2:29 AM (GMT-05:00) To: Susan Hares <[email protected]>, [email protected] Cc: 'Donald Eastlake' <[email protected]>, [email protected], [email protected], [email protected] Subject: Re: [trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt Hi Sue, Thanks for the comments! Please take a look at my responses inline. From: Susan Hares [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Thursday, August 11, 2016 4:15 AM To: [email protected] Cc: [email protected]; Mingui Zhang; 'Donald Eastlake'; [email protected]; [email protected] Subject: Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt Status of draft: Ready for publication, a few editorial nits Concerns: None WG Request/Reminder: We’ll need to make sure these parameters update the TRILL Yang data model. Editorial NITs: 1. Section 2 Page 5, before first paragraph The text would be clear if prior to the first paragraph beginning “lz is reported”, you add a section header with: “operations” as title. [Mingui] Yes, good point! This has been done in the attached 05 version. 2. Section 3 page 6 Step 0, #2, b Old:/Repeat step 1/ to New: /Repeat/Do step 1/ I think the first time through, you have not gotten to Step 1:. [Mingui] That’s true. I think it would also be fine if this phase (Do step 1) is deleted. If this is not true, then this becomes a concern rather than a nit. 3. Section 4, page 8, paragraph 0, sub-paragraph 2). Paragraph begins /2) when an Rbridge/ It may be nice to explain why only equal is treated. - Less than Sz, it is not in campus - Greater than Sz, some other trill Rbridge has limiting size - Only if equal to Sz, it is possible that it changes Sz. [Mingui] Yes, It’s clearer. I have listed these three possibilities with three bullets. Sue Hares So, I will submit the 05 version if there is no objection to above responses. Thanks, Mingui
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