Stewart, thanks for your review. Donald, thanks for your engagement with Stewart’s review. I have entered a No Objection ballot position.
Alissa > On Jun 28, 2017, at 2:06 PM, Stewart Bryant <[email protected]> wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-?? > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2017-06-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-28 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-07-06 > > Summary: > > This is a well written document. I do however have a concern with the scaling > text in section 1.2.x, as I think this could be more accessible and ought to > include discussion of MAC Address scaling. More information below. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: The key justification for multi-area is scaling. The scene is > set > in Section 1.2.x. However there are no references, the design size parameters > are not articulated for each case, and the equations are not derived. I think > that it would be helpful if the draft either provided some more explanation of > the scaling equations and the associated input assumptions, or provided the > assumptions and directed the reader to an accessible text to understand the > equations. Although there is some discussion on it later there is no > discussion > of the number of addresses to be learned in the single and multi-area cases > and > the impact this has on the LSDB. The number of addresses to be learned will > impact the ingress RBridge FIB and the FIB update time so this is just as > significant in understanding the benefit of multi-level as understanding the > link-state convergence time is. > > Nits/editorial comments: None > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ trill mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/trill
