Hi, There are a bunch of RFCs referenced in this draft but not listed in the References section. They need to be added to the References.
I think the Security Considerations section, while it provides a good set of references, needs one added sentence: something about how the document does not change the security considerations because it uses existing standards without change. Section 5 is very short and seems like it could be moved up and merged with the Introduction. (The section number of the following sections would be reduced by one.) Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA [email protected]
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