Reviewer: Michael Tüxen
Review result: Ready with Nits

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This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be 
fixed before publication.

Nits:

Section 1:

Old text:
This can improve network efficiency through better flow
control without packet drops.

New text:
This can improve network efficiency through better congestion
control without packet drops.

Old text:
This specification provides for any ECN marking in the traffic at the
ingress to be copied into the TRILL Extension Header Flags Word.

New Text:
This specification specifies for any ECN marking in the traffic at the
ingress to be copied into the TRILL Extension Header Flags Word.

Section 2:

Old text:
after the Extesnion Flags Word.

New text:
after the Extension Flags Word

Section 3.3

Please define "3-bit ECN codepoint" and refer to Table 3 BEFORE using it.
This might result in swapping Table 2 and Table 3.

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