As is traditional, I have done my AD review of draft-ietf-trill-over-ip-14.
First I would like to thank the authors - Donald, Margaret, Mingui, and
Dacheng, as well as the reviewers for their work on this document.

I did find one minor issue (below) and would recommend a spell-checker to
catch several minor typos.  I will send this to IETF Last Call and place it
on the IESG telechat on March 8.

Minor:

1) In Sec 5.2: " An adjacency can be formed between two TRILL over IP
transport ports if the intersection of the sets of encapsulation methods
they support is not null. If that intersection is null, then no adjacency
is formed."
Given that Sec 5.0 says that the native encapsulation MUST be supported,
how can the set be null?  Is this the set of encapsulation methods other
than the native encapsulation?  Please clarify.

Regards,
Alia
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