Great! Here's a few comments- I notice that Arial is embedded (according to Okular), isn't that a problem?
- I guess we could change all the links from http to https, except the thinkpenguin one
- typos: accleration, GNULinux, idealogy, idealogy, effeciently, proctecting - I wonder if this complies with https://www.gnome.org/logo-and-trademarks/
