Okay, some feedback on yours, then: -Why the gigantic list headings in the getting started section? They take up space and make the document look more imposing than it actually is.
-Where did the square around the checkmark image come from? Maybe the alpha channel of that image didn't work like you thought. Anyways, I think it looked nicer and cleaner before. -I added a python languange link on the links sidebar to mine. Also, I'm seeing a space at the beginning of the 'Mailing List' link. -I like my first two paragraphs better. In the first paragraph, I don't really feel the sentance 'You can use TurboGears to create all kind of web content, especially AJAX powered applications, providing real-time interactive content to your users' means much. It's the welcome page, right? We're done with our advertising, so let's just help them on their way. -I think my second paragraph (right after the getting started) is friendlier. -Can we mention model.py and Toolbox in the model section? I think it'd work if you make what you have there into one paragraph, and then add the sentance from my page mentioning them both. We should probably mention installing the python interface of the database along with the backend, too. -Does TG work if you don't have sqlite installed? -I'd get rid of the first sentence in the views section. -Can we still include my 'join us' blurb? I think that's important. -Should be 'reload' instead of 'reloading' in the infobox in the end. Here's how I would do the text: Note that Turbogears will automatically reload itself when you modify your project in development mode. Refresh your browser to see the changes. --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "TurboGears Docs" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/turbogears-docs -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
