I just read the new set of info regarding the tg-quickstart
Here are some comments:
1- the first paragraph of about.html "Code my data model" is odd, it's
kind of trying to say 3 things at the same time. It also refers to
"identity" which is a concept we have been trying to remove from
repoze.what, because it collides with "identity" in repoze.who, mainly
the issue is that for TG1 identity = authentication, authorization and
visit tracking. While in TG2 identity = repoze.who's WSGI variable.
2- I found two typos on the text (see attached patch for about.html)
3- I think the current set of links for dev are a little off (again see patch)
- Tickets pointed to include closed ones
- it doesn't links to trac's browser for trunk, a direct link is better
- it point to trac as the "repository" this is actually SVN
- it doesn't points to how to run TG2 from trunk
- other minor wording.
Should I apply this patch?
I'm sorry I couldn't find the original mail asking for feedback, so I
started a new thread.
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Index: sidebars.html
===================================================================
--- sidebars.html (revision 5984)
+++ sidebars.html (working copy)
@@ -21,11 +21,13 @@
<div id="sb_bottom" class="sidebar">
<h2>Developing TG2</h2>
<ul class="links">
- <li><a href="http://docs.turbogears.org/2.0/RoughDocs/";>TG2 Documents</a> A work in progress</li>
- <li><a href="http://trac.turbogears.org/query?milestone=2.0&order=priority";>TG2 Trac tickets</a> What's happening now in TG2 dev</li>
+ <li><a href="http://docs.turbogears.org/2.0/RoughDocs/";>More TG2 Documents</a> in progress</li>
+ <li><a href="http://trac.turbogears.org/query?status=new&status=assigned&status=reopened&group=type&milestone=2.0&order=priority";>TG2 Trac tickets</a> What's happening now in TG2 development</li>
<li><a href="http://trac.turbogears.org/timeline";>TG Dev timeline</a> (recent ticket updates, svn checkins, wiki changes)</li>
- <li><a href="http://trac.turbogears.org/browser";>TG2 Trac repository</a> TG2 is in /trunk</li>
- <li><a href="http://groups.google.com/group/turbogears-trunk";> Join the TG-Trunk Mail List</a> just for TG2 discuss/dev </li>
+ <li><a href="http://svn.turbogears.org/trunk";>TG2 SVN repository</a>For checking out a copy</li>
+ <li><a href="http://turbogears.org/2.0/docs/main/Contributing.html#installing-the-development-version-of-turbogears-2-from-source";</a>Follow these instructions for Installing Your Copy</li>
+ <li><a href="http://trac.turbogears.org/browser/trunk";>TG2 Trac's svn view</a> In case you need a quick look</li>
+ <li><a href="http://groups.google.com/group/turbogears-trunk";> Join the TG-Trunk Mail List</a> for TG2 discuss/dev </li>
</ul>
</div>
</py:def>
Index: about.html
===================================================================
--- about.html (revision 5984)
+++ about.html (working copy)
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
<li class="getting_started">
<h3>Code my data model</h3>
<p> When you want a model for storing favorite links or wiki content,
- the <strong>/model</strong> folder in your site is ready to go. .</p>
+ the <strong>/model</strong> folder in your site is ready to go.</p>
<p> You can build a dynamic site without any data model at all. There
still be a default data-model template for you if you didn't enable
identity in quickstart. If you enable identity, you'll got
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
these on the "about.html" page template is to write
<span class="code">
<br/><br/>
- $${sidebar_bottom()}
+ $${sidebar_top()}
<br/>
$${sidebar_bottom()}
<br/><br/>
