Thanks for all these good catches, will fix.
Kelvin.
On 12/10/06, Simon Nash <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
This is getting very close now. Good work! I have a few minor
comments, mostly typos in the samples documentation.
in sample/README.txt
change "already build" to "already built"
in sample/src/main/java/org/apache/tuscany/samples/sdo/overview.html
change Samples Programs to Sample Programs
remove misplaced line breaks on penultimate lines of Overview and
Experimentation
sections
"third category" in Overview paragraph does not match the categories in
the
table that precedes this text when this file is displayed within
sample/site/apidocs/index.html (it's actually a subset of the first
category in the table). An easy fix is to change "and the third
category were"
to "or were"
in the "Getting Ready ..." section, first line, change "depend of" to
"depend on"
in the "Getting Ready ..." section, second last paragraph, first line,
change
"insrtuctions" to "instructions"
download link for the SDO 2.01 specs currently points to the IBM web
site and should
be changed to point to the osoa.org site
in sample/site/apidocs/org/apache/tuscany/samples/sdo/package.html
fix dangling reference at the end of this file
in
sample/site/apidocs/org/apache/tuscany/samples/sdo/otherSources/package.html
in first sentence, change "specification" to "SDO Specification" (to
avoid forward reference when this text is displayed in the package overview
table in sample/site/apidocs/index.html)
change "usefull scnearios" to "useful scenarios"
download link for the SDO 2.01 specs currently points to the IBM web
site and should
be changed to point to the osoa.org site
in
sample/site/apidocs/org/apache/tuscany/samples/sdo/specCodeSnippets/package.html
change "snipets" to "snippets" (twice)
change "flexability" to "flexibility"
change "desireable" to "desirable"
change "extend or improve" to "to extend or improve"
download link for the SDO 2.01 specs currently points to the IBM web
site and should
be changed to point to the osoa.org site
in
sample/site/apidocs/org/apache/tuscany/samples/sdo/specExampleSection/package.html
change "specification, exceptions" to "specification; exceptions"
download link for the SDO 2.01 specs currently points to the IBM web
site and should
be changed to point to the osoa.org site
in output from ExecuteSamples, CreatePurchaseOrder, and ReadPurchaseOrder:
change "Fuhwei Lo" to "Fuhwei Lwo"
in SDO binary distribution
there is duplication of content between RELEASE_NOTES.txt and
CHANGES.txt
Thanks.
Simon
kelvin goodson wrote:
> I have put a new release candidate for SDO Java up at
> http://people.apache.org/~kelvingoodson/sdo_java/RC3/
>
> This tries to take into account the comments that the sample
distribution
> does not need to be stand alone, and that
> javadoc should be shipped with the binary and sample distributions.
>
> I have been fighting with the maven build environment to produce a good
set
> of javadoc as part of the build, from a user's
> perspective, but that's not at all easy given the structure of our
> projects
> and the nature of the maven javadoc plugin,
> so currently the binary distribution carries javadoc for the sdo api
and
> all of the tuscany implementation. The README file
> draws the attention of an SDO user to relevant classes in the tuscany
> implementation javadoc.
>
> Regards, Kelvin.
>
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