Kelvin,
Thanks for your review.  You mentioned that scopes should be the same when
on a given page.
I agree.  I fixed it.  We now have a  sdo cpp FAQ and a sdo Java FAQ. I also
moved text from some of the mentioned threads to the FAQ. The ones I did not
is because I did not know how to net it down to a question and an answer.

You mentioned General heading can be called Tuscany or SDO General heading.
The General heading is more a collection of things that I couldn't find a
good title for on that page :) It is not intended to be general for Tuscany.

Some suggestion for the SDO Java page:

1)  Using SDO Java could move to 'user guide' on this page.
2) Code structure can move to get involved or even to the architecture doc

If there is agreement, I go ahead and make the changes.
Haleh


On 4/12/07, kelvin goodson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

Haleh,

  thanks for addressing these issues.  One concern I have after a quick
look
is that on arriving at a pages such as
http://cwiki.apache.org/TUSCANY/sdo-java.html some of the links on the
left
under a given heading go off to a scope that is not intuitive from the
page
that you were on.  E.g. under the "General" sidebar heading,  the FAQ link
for Java SDO goes to a page that I think is intended to contain generic
cross language SDO questions, i.e. up one level of abstraction from the
page
heading.  It's been that way since version 3 of the file, and I can't work
out whether it's intended that way,  or just a result of copying the
content
from an existing C++ page.

The next sidebar heading below FAQ --- "Downloads" --- relates to
downloading SDO Java (i.e. at the same level of abstraction of the current
page).  I think it would be good if the sidebar headings grouped links at
the same level of abstraction and made this clear from the heading name -
e.g. "Tuscany General", or "SDO General"


BTW,  FWIW, this prompted me to just catalogue the set of tuscany-dev
notes
that I have put an "FAQ" label against when reading the list. I had the
intention of reviewing this list to see what was worth refining into well
formed info snippets some time,  but haven't got to it yet.   Maybe we can
divide and conquer to add to the website's FAQ set.  Does anyone else have
anything like this?

http://www.mail-archive.com/[EMAIL PROTECTED]/msg00469.html
http://www.mail-archive.com/[EMAIL PROTECTED]/msg13291.html
Ron Gavlin's response to tuscany-user of 5th of Jan (cant find a very good
archive URL for this one)
My response to Alexander Pankov of  the  26th of Jan on t-user (again  URL
not readily found)
http://www.mail-archive.com/[EMAIL PROTECTED]/msg00560.html
http://www.mail-archive.com/[EMAIL PROTECTED]/msg00610.html
The thread started by Adriano Crestani on 15th Feb "mvn problem?"
Unanswered thread from Ignacio on 16th Feb
Frank's responses to Murtaza Goga in the thread started 20th March

http://mail-archives.apache.org/mod_mbox/ws-tuscany-user/200703.mbox/[EMAIL 
PROTECTED]
The thread entitled "Root property that is not containment" started 29th
of
Jan
The thread entitled "Getting started with Tuscany databinding" started on
10th April

Regards, Kelvin.








On 12/04/07, haleh mahbod <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> As mentioned in [1] I started working on the website and the first phase
> is
> ready for review.
>
> My first attempt ended up with something other than what I had
originally
> planned; which was to move content.  Instead, I worked on the
readability
> of
> the website.
> I have tried to use a consistent look and feel  across the pages  to
make
> it
> easier to find information. In addition, I tried to make
the  information
> available progressively ( allowing the user to decide if they want to
> learn
> more).
>
> Here is the layout at a high level for the Tuscany Website (
> http://cwiki.apache.org/TUSCANY/)
>
>    - Home page - On this page you will find the general stuff that apply
>    to the whole Tuscany as well as links to each subproject and
Downloads.
>     - Each subproject has an overview page, for example SCA overview or
>    DAS overview. On the overview page you find a brief introduction to
the
>    subproject and links to resources which are introductory information
on
> the
>    subproject, for example white papers, articles, webinar links if any.
>    - Each subproject also has a more detailed page for those who want to
>    get more info about that particular subproject. For example, SCA
Java,
> SDO
>    C++, DAS RDB or DAS LDAP.
>    - Each detailed subproject page's navigation bar looks the same and
>    provides more detailed information on the project. For example, FAQ,
>    Documentation, How to get involved, Downloads, etc.
>    - I tried to keep each page's navigation information to the minimum
>    information that is needed for that stage in order to make it easier
to
> find
>    information.
>
> I'd like your feedback on this phase before we go ahead and put all the
> content in place.
> -  Is the navigation intuitive?
> -  Do we need additional information?
>
> If everyone is happy with the  look and feel, let's try to keep the
> consistency across the pages as we add content.
>
> For the next step, I am trying to capture content from the old website,
> the
> old wiki and mailing threads.
> Please review the content on the overview pages (already there)  and
> correct
> it if  needed.
> There is a lot to be done and any help or feedback is very welcomed :)
>
> Thanks,
> Haleh
>
> [1] -
>
>
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