On Jan 18, 2005, at 17:52, Jack Cruzan wrote:

Greetings!
Ok if any of you read my earlier email you would have seen that:
A) I am a newbie programmer.
B) A Shadowrun gamer.
C) In over my head making a SRCG (Shadowrun Character Generator)
so with that in mind gave up making my python based SRCG. Instead I am
making python Shadowrun utilities!
The first of which was a program size and cost calculator for decker's
utilities and skillsofts. (I always hated flipping back and forth in the
book to figure it out). Thought I would let you see it and maybe
critique? Be kind its first original program I have written. (Well thats
not php or shell script).



Doesn't look bad. However, you should aim to repeat yourself as little as possible, and the "The program's[...]" string is repeated 4 times. You should delay its display until the end of the program, like that:


if rating < 4:
        availability = "2/7"
        cost = rating * 100
# same for other options...
# [skipping to the end of the program]

print "The program's Availability is ", availability, " days and costs ", cost


Of course, an even better way is to use string formatting in the print line. But that's not really important.


-- Max
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"Look at you hacker... A pathetic creature of meat and bone, panting and sweating as you run through my corridors... How can you challenge a perfect, immortal machine?"


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