Sorry, I should have read further on. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Jerry Banker" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Sent: Wednesday, September 29, 2004 10:36 AM Subject: Re: [U2] Charter WordSmithing
Article V, Section 6, if the Vice-President can also be an at large member then wouldn't that make the board only 8 instead of 9 or am I reading it wrong. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Brutzman, Bill" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Sent: Tuesday, September 28, 2004 5:58 PM Subject: [U2] Charter WordSmithing As an individual member...I am grateful to those who put the charter together. A few comments follow... Article 2, 1st bullet... Consider substituting the word "Vendor" with "Supplier" as the former moniker has a somewhat pejorative connotation. Section 4... Change to....Members who do not renew their membership...in a timely manner risk termination. Section 5...Termination of Membership In the name of positive spin...This section would do better to appear at the end of the document. The Board may remove anyone..."without cause". Why would the Board want to remove someone if there were no cause? Consider dropping "without cause". Article IV...Line 4 Change "Vendor" to "Supplier" Section 6...Paragraph 6 "Incorrect votes will not be counted." This appears to be a silly statement... Consider dropping it. Section 8...Paragraph 2 The board "must" act. What if they do not? Will the sky fall in? Consider changing "must" to... "is required to". Regards, --Bill Bill Brutzman, Mgr IT HK MetalCraft Mfg Corp PO Box 775 35 Industrial Road Lodi NJ 07644-0775 973.471.7770 x145 .voice 973.471.9666 .fax ------- u2-users mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe please visit http://listserver.u2ug.org/ ------- u2-users mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] To unsubscribe please visit http://listserver.u2ug.org/
