Elfy has proposed merging lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1 into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.
Requested reviews: Ubiquity Slideshow (ubiquity-slideshow) For more details, see: https://code.launchpad.net/~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1/+merge/210291 Change english to English -- https://code.launchpad.net/~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1/+merge/210291 Your team Ubiquity Slideshow is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~elfy/ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu/slide1 into lp:ubiquity-slideshow-ubuntu.
=== modified file 'slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html' --- slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html 2014-02-24 13:46:50 +0000 +++ slideshows/xubuntu/slides/01_desktop.html 2014-03-10 20:32:49 +0000 @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <div class="main"> <div class="content full"> - <p>In the desktop, you will see some icons that can be used to access some of the most common places on your system. In addition, you will see a single, multipurpose panel at the top of the screen, much like this:</p> + <p>On the desktop, you will see icons that can be used to access some of the most common places on your system. In addition, you will see a single, multipurpose panel at the top of the screen, much like this:</p> <div class="panel"> <img src="images/shot_panel.png" alt="Xubuntu default panel" /> </div> @@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ <p class="note">The middle part of the panel is dedicated to window buttons for open applications.</p> </div> <div class="content half"> - <p class="note">Far in the right, you will see a clock and a date. Click the date to see the monthly calendar.</p> - <p class="note">Left to the clock you will see the indicators, which give you information on your system, including network connectivity, battery (when appropriate), volume level, instant messages and more.</p> + <p class="note">On the far right, you will see a clock and a date. Click the date to see the monthly calendar.</p> + <p class="note">Left of the clock you will see the indicators, which give you information on your system, including network connectivity, battery (when appropriate), volume level, instant messages and more.</p> </div> </div>
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