On Tue, 2009-04-14 at 15:43 +0200, Thorsten Wilms wrote: > On Mon, 2009-04-13 at 22:05 +0300, Stas SUSHKOV wrote: > > Updated: > > http://stas.nerd.ro/pub/ubuntu-md/ubuntu-md.png > > > > Sources: > > http://stas.nerd.ro/pub/ubuntu-md/ >
:) Thanks a lot for the critics :) I'll try improving it. > It looks harsh, loud and crowded to me. > > I think you could greatly and easily improve it by making the whole > speech bubble white (or with just a subtle yellow tint). Then you could > get rid of the area around the head, which would give you more room to > breath. > > You should switch everything but "ubuntu" and maybe "jaunty" to a font > that doesn't look like a joke. MgOpen Moderna would be worth a try, but > you have to pay attention to the kerning. > > You should tweak the position and size of the bubble and the jackalope > such that the jackalope either doesn't touch the bubble at all, or has > parts that clearly overlap it; the just touching the curve as it is > right now looks accidental and hurst both shapes. > > Give the Jackalope colors that don't make it resemble a disabled gui > element. > > Drop that "skyline" in the background, it only adds noise and clashes > with the zick-zack. > > > -- > Thorsten Wilms > > thorwil's design for free software: > http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ > > -- () Campania Panglicii în ASCII /\ http://stas.nerd.ro/ascii/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
