On Fri, 2010-12-10 at 13:44 -0600, Leandro Gómez wrote:

> Xubuntu wallpapers:

> http://www.flickr.com/photos/leogg/5224255554/in/pool-1546...@n20/

Very interesting concept. Varying aspect ratios and panels might be a
problem, so you might want to reconsider the composition.

Despite paper planes, the dark blue makes this feel rather heavy.


> http://www.flickr.com/photos/leogg/5227565853/in/pool-1546...@n20/

Try a lighter color, maybe even lighter than the background, for the
balloons. That gray is too harsh.

Be aware of:
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/0/0b/Bureau_GNOME_Fedora_7.png
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/FC7Themes/Fc7ThemeProposalFlyingHighRound2


> http://www.flickr.com/photos/leogg/5237359494/in/pool-1546...@n20/

Your lighthouse emits a cone of shadow?


> http://www.flickr.com/photos/leogg/5247055287/in/pool-1546...@n20/

Fun. Consider a more stylized figure.


> Edubuntu wallpapers:
> 
> http://www.flickr.com/photos/leogg/5227980505/in/pool-1595...@n22/ 

The astronaut feels like a random addition to me. If you want to keep
him or her, consider to unify the style with the one of the tree and
planet.


-- 
Thorsten Wilms

thorwil's design for free software:
http://thorwil.wordpress.com/



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