Hi, On Thu, Sep 17, 2009 at 10:13 PM, Dylan McCall <[email protected]> wrote: > Oh, thanks for the branch! > > I made a spin on that which shortens the text (since the slide - and my > head - couldn't fit it all). I reduced the links by a level each to make > them easier to remember. I joined community and commercial support into > a single bullet point.
Sounds fine, thanks for working on it. > On another note, a Google search reveals that there are 917,000 pages > with the exact phrase "open and vibrant." (I think this justifies my > hatred of that phrase as an unbelievably meaningless cliché, applied to > everything from Initech to the moon). Well, that's not actually *that* many pages. There are a lot of pages on the internet. The fact that a phrase is used a lot doesn't make it meaningless. I used the phrase as it's consistent with the one used in the Help Center. It also happens to be true. Having said that, I don't think it matters. > One problem: "There is also commercial support available through Canonical, > its partners and approved companies" > ...Can we make that sentence shorter? Yes, I would have thought so: "Canonical and approved companies provide commercial support." "Commercial support is available." -- Matthew East http://www.mdke.org gnupg pub 1024D/0E6B06FF -- documentation.html does not introduce documentation or any support options except ubuntuforums https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/429874 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
