It was starting to sound overwhelmingly passive, so I changed it to
“Use it to create letters, presentations and spreadsheets, as well as diagrams 
and databases.”

Are you okay with that?

You can view the slideshow by grabbing it from the bzr repository and
running test-slideshow.sh. (Martin Owens’s Ground Control makes that
super easy).

You can also head to http://people.ubuntu.com/~dylanmccall/ubiquity-
slideshow-ubuntu to see a (probably) recent version.

Thanks for your help.

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