Public bug reported:
GIVEN:
Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat and
e-mail straight to your desktop and makes the information of the services a
seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts you can easily keep
in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same time.
Just set your account once and every time you start your computer all the
accounts and services you've added are ready for you.
I think it needs a lot more commas to facilitate reading.
PROPOSED:
Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat, and
e-mail straight to your desktop. It also makes the information of the services
a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts, you can easily
keep in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same
time. Just set your account once, and every time you start your computer, all
the accounts and services you've added are ready for you.
** Affects: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Importance: Undecided
Status: New
** Tags: bitesize saucy
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accounts-whyadd.page grammar fixes
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