Thanks for putting some time into this. I still think nothing at all would be better, though. It might be useful to have one sentence saying that these topics will be interesting to you only if you're an expert. But I think that's mostly satisfied by calling the section "Advanced topics" in the first place.
Incidentally, I suggest avoiding the phrases "this topic" and "this section", because they're symptoms of unnecessary sentences (try deleting them); and "the ... user", because it's impersonal and slightly disrespectful (try "you" instead). <https://lists.ubuntu.com/archives /ubuntu-doc/2006-July/006669.html> -- Intro paragraph in "Advanced topics" section doesn't really help https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/144783 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is the bug contact for Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
