Yes your suggestion sounds fine to me. So that would be a change to the first paragraph of addremove-ppa.html
By the way I think step 5 of the procedure on addremove-ppa.html would be clearer as something like this: "Click Add and enter the PPA's location (as noted in step 1 above)". -- You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1628706 Title: Revise PPA description? To manage notifications about this bug go to: https://bugs.launchpad.net/ubuntu/+source/ubuntu-docs/+bug/1628706/+subscriptions -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
