Third party is definitely OK then. The comma is definitely incorrect, however. It SOUNDS more correct to my ear if you change "that" to "which", but either way it isn't grammatically proper. It is not something most users will notice, but I believe that a professional image for the project relies on a professional presentation, and if the software contains spelling/grammar errors, it looks amateurish. And it is definitely not amateur.
It's a little off-topic, but I'll also mention that I think the improvements to Add/Remove in Edgy are wonderful. -- Typo in "Checking installed and available applications" dialog https://launchpad.net/bugs/63487 -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
