"Edits the wireless networks used by Network Manager" does not sound
right.

The comment field should be phrased an imperative verb.
http://library.gnome.org/devel/hig-book/stable/desktop-application-menu.html.en#menu-item-tooltips

So I suggest:

Comment=Edit wireless networks used by Network Manager

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(Hardy) please remove Network Manager Editor from Internet and Preferences
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/201127
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