Public bug reported:
The following contains grammatical errors found under the categories
'compiz-intro', 'compiz-configure', and 'compiz-problems' from desktop-
effects.xml for Hardy.
Compiz-intro
- [desktop more fun and easier to use.] I think it should be reworded 'desktop
fun and easy to use'.
- [Visual effects are enabled by default] As far as I know, visual effects are
not enabled by default. Correct me if I'm wrong, but the default is no visual
effects.
- [users of computers with certain] Somehow, I don't think the statement 'users
of computers' makes sense. The sentence should be reworded.
- [or cause the computer] Should be reworded 'or they may cause the computer'.
Compiz-configure
- The directions at the beginning to open up Appearance should be italized.
- It is often quicker to open up Visual Effects through right-clicking the
desktop background. Perhaps this should be mentioned.
Compiz-problems
- Again, the navigating should be italized.
** Affects: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
Importance: Undecided
Status: New
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Grammatical errors found in desktop-effects.xml
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/215441
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