This seems to have changed a lot since I last edited it. It is full of what Wikipedia calls "Weasel Words" and is very self promoting.
I notice the double space between sentences is used on the patch. I know this is used heavily within word processing and we discussed it on the mailing list but am very against it, as it can cause more problems than it is worth if we use XSL transforms at any point in the future. Also don't like every paragraph starting with "Ubuntu" - this structure could be tidied up with a list. I am off to have a look at the desktop- training package because I think there is material in chapter one that says this more effectively and could probably be integrated. -- Tech Review Report for whyswitch.xml https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/219806 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu. -- ubuntu-bugs mailing list [email protected] https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-bugs
