** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: In Progress => Fix Committed
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On page 8, 'Ubuntu desktop' should be either capitalized or reworded
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584619
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 8 (p. 10 of the PDF)
Type: grammar
The second sentence of the last paragraph of the 'brief history' section sounds
awkward: "As of 2010, Ubuntu desktop is installed on nearly 2% [...]". There
are several possible solutions: 'Ubuntu desktop' could be reworded ('the Ubuntu
desktop'? 'the Ubuntu desktop system'?) or 'desktop' could be capitalized.
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