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Assignee: (unassigned) => ilya haykinson (haykinson)
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"Laptop computers commonly use Wi-Fi due to their portability"
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New
Bug description:
Chapter 3, Paragraph 3, sentence 2: "Laptop computers com-
monly use Wi-Fi due to their portability,"
This sounds ambiguous (to me), one might ask if some portable laptop computers
cannot use a wired connection due to their portability.
I suggest they "...due to its portability" (i.e. Wi-Fi's portability)",
"...commonly use Wi-Fi to take advantage of their portability", or simply
"...for portability".
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