I think it's fine where it is. Having the introductory phrase remark on
the time period keeps the focus in line with the history we're telling.
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => Invalid
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Importance: Undecided => Low
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
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Move however to start of sentence (page 9)
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Bug description:
Move however to the start of the sentence
In the past decade, however, graphical user interfaces have come a long way in
terms of usability,
reliability and appearance
becomes
However, in the past decade, graphical user interfaces have come a long way in
terms of usability,
reliability and appearance
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