Public bug reported:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar
Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over
the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.
Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse
comprise a single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a
comma separating them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:
In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the
mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.
** Affects: ubuntu-manual
Importance: Undecided
Status: New
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Superfluous comma before "and" on p.34
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585380
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Workspaces", p. 34 (PDF p. 36)
Type: grammar
Manual has:
In this case you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over
the workspace switcher, and scrolling the mouse wheel.
Moving the mouse over the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse comprise a
single action, not a list of options, so there shouldn't be a comma separating
them, although one after "in this case" wouldn't hurt:
In this case, you can still change between workspaces by moving the mouse over
the workspace switcher and scrolling the mouse wheel.
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