** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Suggest comma before "such as" on p.32
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585361
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Customizing your desktop", p. 32 (PDF p. 34)
Type: copy edit suggestion
Manual has:
Now [...] let’s take a look at customizing some of its features such as
modifying the behavior of your panels, or changing the look and feel of your
desktop.
Since the sentence could end after "features", this particular use of "such as"
is better preceded by a comma, such as it is at many other points in the manual.
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