** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
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Comma splice on p.26
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585303
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, ยง "Closing, maximizing, restoring, and minimizing windows", p. 26 (PDF
p. 28)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
Once minimized the window will no longer be visible, however, its corresponding
button in the bottom panel will remain, indicating the program is still running
in the background.
A comma could go after "minimized" (if you really like commas), but not before
"however": a full stop or semicolon is the appropriate punctuation.
Alternatively, "but" could be used as the conjunction:
Once minimized the window will no longer be visible, but its corresponding
button in the bottom panel will remain, indicating the program is still running
in the background.
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