** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Kevin Godby (godbyk)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Comma splice on p.35
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585403
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 2, § "Desktop background", p. 35 (PDF p. 37)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
Here you will see Ubuntu’s default selection of backgrounds, however, if you
have your own pictures stored on your computer
you can use these as well.
Suggestion for rewrite involving following sentences:
Here you will see Ubuntu’s default selection of backgrounds. To change the
background simply click the picture
you would like to use. You're not limited to this selection though. To use one
of your own pictures, click the Add... button, and navigate to the image you
want.
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