** Branch linked: lp:ubuntu-manual -- Comma splice on p.34 & Suggestions for rewrite https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585397 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Manual Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu Manual.
Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed Bug description: Rev. 788 Ch. 2, § "Theme", p. 34 (PDF p.36) Types: grammar, suggestions Manual has: The theme called “Ambiance” is enabled by default, however, you will see there are seven other default themes to choose from in the list. There is a comma splice before "however" here. "Enabled" has the wrong connotation. "Used" is more appropriate. "In the list" would probably be better earlier in the sentence, if used at all. Suggestion: The "Ambiance" theme is used by default, but there are seven other themes you can choose from. Just click once on the theme you want to try, and the changes will take effect immediately. _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
