** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Double "should", p.59
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, § "History", p. 59 (PDF p. 61)
Type: style
Manual has:
Firefox should open a “sidebar” on the left side of the browser window, which
should contain your browsing history categorized as “Today,” “Yesterday,” “Last
7 days,” “This month,” and then monthly for the times before that.
This sentence doesn't need two "should"s questioning whether that will actually
occur; a comma should also precede "categorized"; and moving the location to
the beginning helps join what Firefox does and why.
On the left side of the browser window, Firefox should open a “sidebar”
containing your browsing history, categorized as “Today,” “Yesterday,” “Last 7
days,” “This month,” and then monthly for the times before that.
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