Public bug reported: Rev. 788 Ch. 3, § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64) Types: style; grammar
Manual has: Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or [email protected]. "For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better next to "username", since that's what the example is actually of. Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or [email protected], in the Username field. OR Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or [email protected]. ** Affects: ubuntu-manual Importance: Undecided Status: New -- Reorder for clarity, and use a comma after "for example", p.62 https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/586358 You received this bug notification because you are a member of Ubuntu Manual Bugs, which is subscribed to Ubuntu Manual. Status in Ubuntu Manual: New Bug description: Rev. 788 Ch. 3, § "Setting up your Sending options", p. 62 (PDF p. 64) Types: style; grammar Manual has: Enter your username below, in the Username field, for example joe.x.user, or [email protected]. "For example" should be followed by a comma. It might also be better next to "username", since that's what the example is actually of. Below that, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or [email protected], in the Username field. OR Below that, in the Username field, enter your username, for example, joe.x.user, or [email protected]. _______________________________________________ Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~ubuntu-manual-bugs More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
