** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Assignee: (unassigned) => Brandon Jardine (brandon-jardine)
** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: New => In Progress
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Past tense required for "you finish writing", p.64
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: In Progress
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, ยง "Understanding the folder list", p. 64 (PDF p. 66)
Type: grammar
Manual has:
For example, if you are working on your email while offline (such as in an
airplane), you can still click the Send button on an email message that you
finish writing.
The past tense, "you've finished", is needed; the "Send button" isn't "on" a
message; and the bracketed example-within-an-example can also be tidied up
Suggestion:
For example, if you are in an airplane or another location without an Internet
connection, you can still click the Send button once you've finished writing an
email.
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