** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
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Ubuntu can also connect p.50
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585850
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 3, ยง "Other connection methods", p. 50
Type: style
Manual has:
Ubuntu can also connect using mobile broadband, VPNs, or DSLs, however, these
methods are beyond the scope of this guide.
Ignoring the comma splice, this would be fine if mobile broadband, VPNs, and
DSL hadn't just been mentioned, making "also" inappropriate:
Suggestion:
The details of making connections using mobile broadband, VPNs, or DSLs,
however, are beyond the scope of this guide.
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