** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
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Comma splice on p.18
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585288
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch. 1, ยง "Enter your details", p.18 (PDF p.20)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
You will be able to continue the installation process regardless of your
password strength, however, for security reasons it is best to choose a strong
one.
This could be corrected with a semicolon or full stop, but "but" would keep it
single-sentenced:
You will be able to continue the installation process regardless of your
password strength, but for security reasons it is best to choose a strong one.
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