** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Milestone: None => edition-2
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Comma splice on p.19
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/585292
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Committed
Bug description:
Rev. 788
Ch.1, ยง "Log in automatically", p. 19 (PDF p. 21)
Type: grammar
Manual has a comma splice (before "however"):
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, however, if
privacy or security are important to you, this option is not recommended.
Either the comma before "however" should be a full stop or semicolon, or the
appropriate conjunction, "but", should be employed:
This makes your login experience quicker and more convenient, but if privacy or
security are important to you, this option is not recommended.
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