** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
       Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released

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Rewording to make it sound less specific (page 8)
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584452
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released

Bug description:
I think the below sentence should have 'Debian-based' removed. Ubuntu is 
(according to Distrowatch) the most popular linux distro, and with Debian-based 
in there, it makes it seem as if it is very specific and not popular at all. 

i.e. my chocolate flavoured ice cream is the most popular ice cream that is 
flavoured chocolate in my small village 
>>  my chocolate flavored ice cream is the most popular ice cream


Ubuntu spread quickly, the size of the community rapidly increased, and it soon 
became the most popular Debian-based Linux distribution available



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