** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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Awkward wording on page 9; rephrasing recommended
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584633
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 9 (p. 11 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/sentence structure/style
The second sentence of the second bullet point under 'Is Ubuntu right for you?'
reads "For the vast majority of tasks that people use their computers for every
day [...]", which sounds rather awkward. An alternative is "For the vast
majority of everyday tasks that computer use facilitates [...]".
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