** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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Inconsistent comma usage on page 8 after years
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584608
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: Prologue, p. 8 (p. 10 of the PDF)
Type: grammar/punctuation
In the third and fourth paragraphs of 'A brief history of Ubuntu', various
dates are mentioned. However, they are sometimes followed by commas and
sometimes not. I suggest adding commas to the years lacking them to keep comma
usage consistent. The following changes should thus be made:
Paragraph 3, line 4: "2007 Dell [...]" should be "2007, Dell [...]"
Paragraph 3, line 5: "2005 the French Police [...]" should be "2005, the French
Police [...]"
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