** Changed in: ubuntu-manual
Status: Fix Committed => Fix Released
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Poor sentence structure on page 12
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/584658
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: Fix Released
Bug description:
Version: 788
Chapter and page number: 1, page 12 (page 14 of the PDF)
Type: grammar
The first sentence of the second paragraph under 'The Live CD' reads, "The
speed at which your computer can read information from a CD is much slower than
reading information from a hard drive". The sentence structure is a bit off; a
better alternative would be "The speed at which your computer can read
information from a CD is much slower than that at which it can read information
from a hard drive".
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