Public bug reported:

Attached is a patch for some style change suggestions to the prologue:

 - changed instances of "Ubuntu Manual Team" and related instances to "we", and 
introduced the team as "we"
 - changed passive voice into active voice in a few places
 - added some line  breaks in long lines
 - changed "hundreds of thousands" to "millions" (of Ubuntu users), which is 
more accurate

** Affects: ubuntu-manual
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New

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Some style changes to the prologue
https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/508951
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Status in Ubuntu Manual: New

Bug description:
Attached is a patch for some style change suggestions to the prologue:

 - changed instances of "Ubuntu Manual Team" and related instances to "we", and 
introduced the team as "we"
 - changed passive voice into active voice in a few places
 - added some line  breaks in long lines
 - changed "hundreds of thousands" to "millions" (of Ubuntu users), which is 
more accurate



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