-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Jan Vancura wrote: > Drew Mainland wrote: >>> Hello, I made the commerical, I changed it around a bit. It's >>> on YouTube @ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8QmUW42ziGg >>> > > Nice :) Really. > > -- > +--------------------------------------------------------------------+ > ¦ Jenda Van ura _ Join the ASCII Ribbon > Campaign ¦ ¦ Email : [EMAIL PROTECTED] ( ) > http://www.asciiribbon.org ¦ ¦ GnuPG : 519D056A > X Against HTML e-mail ¦ ¦ Jabber: > [EMAIL PROTECTED] / \ Against proprietary attachments ¦ > +--------------------------------------------------------------------+ > Not too shabby. I liked the logos of all kinds or architectures flooding the screen - although they could be displayed for a shorter time (it starts to look cluttery after a few seconds). It might be a good idea to use a standing and/or slightly elongated Tux, so he doesn't look so diminutive next to the other two. Also, the Tux voice could probably use more expression - bring him up to the level of the others. We want Linux to seem human, not robot-like, and the low, slow voice doesn't quite portray that. One other thing I thought of was that the Mac ads were all made for TV slots, and so were 30 seconds or at most a minute. For future ads, it would probably be wise to shoot for that time slot, since this one tries to convey a lot for an ad - better to have a series of punchy short ones than a few longer ones that will lose people's interest. Anyway, keep it up and keep us posted! -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.6 (GNU/Linux)
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