Hi Ronnie, On Thu, 2007-04-12 at 02:06 +0100, Ronnie Tucker wrote: > Here it is folks! > > fullcircle #0 - FINAL BETA! > http://files.fullcirclemagazine.org/uploads/issue0_b5.pdf > > added: > Feisty Fawn Features article (thanks to Phil Bull for the screenshots) > > still to do: > add KDE and Xfce versions for Feisty > RELEASE IT! > > Anything you good folks can see wrong with it before it gets released??...
It looks great! I proof read the first 2/3 of it and found the following (mostly very small) errors or typos: * p1 - "Ubuntu 7.04 - Whats Hot" -> "Ubuntu 7.04 - What's Hot" * p2 - "Easier Install of Binary Drivers" -> "Easier Installation of Binary Drivers" * p2 - "How to contribute to fullcircle" -> "How to contribute to full circle" (?) * p3 - "For a window manager, Ubuntu used Gnome" -> Gnome=GNOME, and GNOME is a desktop, not just a window manager. * p3 - "Warty Warthog being the first" -> "Warty Warthog was the first" * p4 - "its orange and brown" -> "orange and brown" * p4 - Final sentence about LiveCD - I think others were offering LiveCDs, just no major desktop distros. * p5 - "dark by todays standards" -> "dark by today's standards" * p5 - "LiveCD's for 64-bit" -> "Live CDs for 64-bit" * p5 - "Power PC's" -> "PowerPC" * p5 - "Kubuntu, this was" -> "Kubuntu. This was" * p5 - "Gnome" -> "GNOME" * p6 - "squarely at the educational establishments" -> "squarely at educational establishments" (?) * p6 - "(package manager)" -> "(a package manager)" * p6 - "became first" -> "became the first" * p6 - "Also added was KDE Bluetooth" -> "KDE Bluetooth was also added" (?) * p7 - "half yearly" -> "half-yearly" * p7 - "LiveCD" -> "Live CD" (now called Desktop CD) * p7 - "hard drives but" -> "hard drives, but" * p7 - "could install" -> "could also install" * p7 - "Gnome" -> "GNOME" * p7 - "resources Xubuntu" -> "resources, Xubuntu" * p8 - "F-spot" -> "F-Spot" * p8 - "software; digiKam," -> "software (digiKam)," * p9 - "codecs, binary drivers" -> "codecs and binary drivers" * p9 - "contacts, Yahoo" -> "contacts and Yahoo" * p9 - "them in Ubuntu" -> "then into Ubuntu" * p9 - "dual partition" -> "dual-boot setup" (?) * p9 - "and their strengths" -> "and their signal strengths" * p9 - "instantly, via" -> "instantly via" * p9 - "local network with no configuration." -> "local network, without configuration." * p10 - "codecs for you, no" -> "codecs for you; no" * p11 - "to determine to which" -> "to determine which" * p11 - "Othello didn't" -> "Othello, didn't" * p12 - The main difference with the new Help Centre is the topic-based help. Help is now split into bitesize chunks, which are straight-to-the-point and mean that you don;t have to read pages of writing to find the instructions you were after. * p13 - "Easier install of binary drivers" -> "Easier installation of binary drivers" (I understand that this may be because of space restrictions in the layout) * p13 - "Manager allow users" -> "Manager allows users" * p13 - "manage binary drivers of" -> "manage the binary drivers of" (?) Also, there is a large gap on page 3, could it be filled with a release timeline or some project logos maybe? And before I forget, do you need me to relicense any of my images or are you OK with the license (IIRC, CC-BY-SA 2.5)? Thanks again for your great work, Phil -- Phil Bull http://www.launchpad.net/people/philbull -- ubuntu-marketing mailing list [EMAIL PROTECTED] Modify settings or unsubscribe at: https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-marketing
