This paragraph, well really run-on sentence, really reads like an old text 
based RPG. "You enter the room. On your left you find a piece of software." 
Since we're editing it anyway, let's try to improve it a bit while we're at it. 
How about something more like:

While there are thousands of packages in the Ubuntu archive, there are still a 
lot we haven't gotten to yet. If there is an exciting new piece of software 
that you feel needs wider exposure, maybe you want to try your hand at creating 
a package for Ubuntu or a PPA. This guide will take you through the steps of 
packaging new software.
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https://code.launchpad.net/~dholbach/ubuntu-packaging-guide/890585/+merge/82909
Your team Ubuntu Packaging Guide Team is requested to review the proposed merge 
of lp:~dholbach/ubuntu-packaging-guide/890585 into lp:ubuntu-packaging-guide.

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